Monday, 25 August 2014

Shared Writing

WALT include thoughts and feelings in our writing.

Today we wrote a shared story about a time when we have been scared.  We had to include WOW words and feelings or thoughts about the situation.  We had many great ideas about sharing our feelings.



I wonder if you can pick out some WOW words in our story - post them into a comment to get 5 points for your table!

2 comments:

  1. Fantastic juicy words, Room 5! I loved the way you included words about your feelings! Ka pai! Keep up the great work!

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  2. Anna; storm lightning hail spooked shaking thunder

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