Sunday, 24 August 2014

Writing Star

WALT include our thoughts and feelings

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How do you think Frankee went with including her thoughts and feelings in her writing?  I think she started her story well saying that she is happy. I also like how she has said '....because....'

Well done Frankee

2 comments:

  1. Fab writing Frankee, I loved this story and I know that you are happy that Seth has started school, it won't be long until your brother is there too. Great story Frank I'm sure Seth will love it too.

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    1. Thanks Steph - we have great writers in Funky 5

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